Nehema ([info]nehema) wrote,
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[Fic] Transformers, Mikaela/Sam/Bumblebee, "Night Drive"

Title: Night Drive
Author: [info]onefishjyuufish
Fandom: Transformers (2007)
Wordcount: 811
Pairing: Mikaela/Sam/Bumblebee
Rating: R
Spoilers: Vague end of movie spoilers
Warnings: Sex, voyeurism
Feedback: LOVED AND ADORED.

Author's Note: I have to thank [info]greenet and [info]vampychick for their encouragement, [info]froggimus_rex for same and beta-ing on the fly, Bumblebee for being the pimpmaster-est Autobot ever, and the new Transformers movie for being really fucking awesome. I have no regrets.

Crossposted to [info]transficsation, to [info]tf2007fun, and to [info]beexsam.

i’ll hold you up
and drive you all night
i’ll hold you up
and drive you baby ‘till you feel the daylight
- Melissa Ferrick, "Drive"

Her mouth is on yours, Sam, and we're hurtling through the night on some back road that twists in ways that make your stomach drop to your toes - or maybe that's her again, the both of you sprawled across my back seat, panting and sweat-slick despite the a/c I'm running. Your hands slide up her back, she arches, and her shirt goes flying, drapes across my dash.

Flicking through the radio signals, I pick the station that has the best back-beat, one that thrums through the seats and makes my speakers quiver despite the lower volume. She moans, your mouth on her now, and she throws her head back, painted nails digging into my upholstery - I rev my engine and your moan echoes hers, but deeper.

She's impatient; your shirt joins hers and I can feel your skin sliding against the leather, the curve of your spine as her hands help you with your jeans, cotton boxers bunched in with the denim as she jerks them down past your knees. Your palm presses into the back of the driver's seat, bracing against me as the both of you kiss until you break for air, and I like to think you mean it for me when your thumb strokes a gentle circle, the pressure so different - but so deliberate - it can't be an accident.

You're already so hard, your heart beating so fast I don't know how you stand it, and her knees bear her weight as she slides down off the seat between your legs. She grins, tangibly bright and laughing, and you answer with your own, nervous and wanting. I can feel you tense, the bunching of muscles as she grips you firmly, and I wish I could catch your head as it falls back against my door hard enough to make me wince. You don't seem to mind though, your groans joining the music like an obscene new remix, and I can't help but go faster, so very careful so I don't jostle her when she has you in her mouth, lips tight around you and swallowing down.

You still have your hands against my seats, kneading in against the thick leather, and you probably don't even notice the faint blue sparks that trailed from your fingertips when you slipped your fingers into her hair.

I wish I could do more, but I'm content for now to watch and learn as she straddles your hips, her hands pushing up against my roof like I'm all that's holding you two together. You press back against the door as she takes you in, her thighs trembling, and I have to jack the a/c again just to keep up with the heat of your bodies, your friction.

A bend of the road necessitates a sharp turn and I wish I could apologize as her hips jar against yours, your gasps sudden and half-pained. I settle for turning up the volume and turning my attention fully to the road for a moment, letting you two fall into a rhythm.

When I shift my focus again, it's a natural progression to match the slip and shift of your bodies to the changing of gears, my engine purring as I take the road for my own. I can feel you better than I can her, nearly the whole of you pressed down, pressed back against me, your heels grinding against my carpeting as you arch up to meet her, one hand still sliding against the edge of the seat. I take it as encouragement and I grab another station as the song changes, finding something wordless but driven, pounding from the speakers in counterpoint to you both.

She's panting, moaning against your mouth and I step on the gas, so to speak, breaking human laws across the board as you shiver, words catching in your throat as you reach something intangible, something I can't quite grasp just from the feel of you tightening, slick and burning hot against me. Her voice is sharp as she cries out and I feel the pressure of your hand lift from me as you steady her, bracing yourself as you follow her. I floor it, feeling you shake as I do, my gears grinding as I reach the apex of my acceleration - biological imperative, my aft.

I think I feel as steady as you do when I finally shift back down to first, the two of you twined and breathing in tandem, the faint trembling of your body like a silent song, like none I've ever heard.


Hours later, she leaves in a slow press of her lips against yours, a whispered goodbye. You're still in the backseat, but I don't mind playing chauffeur, especially when you're so close to sleep now. Your heart beats slow, marking revolutions as I carry you home.
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[info]devilishkurumi

July 12 2007, 08:35:28 UTC 4 years ago

wow - 1st POV with Bee, that's a first!

And how can you expect any feedback other than a heartfelt "guh"?!

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 09:37:45 UTC 4 years ago

Hahaha, that'll definitely do! Thank you!

[info]minishini

July 12 2007, 09:05:26 UTC 4 years ago

I need to change my panties. Brb.

...

Okay. VERY WELL WRITTEN. You did a fantastic job pulling off 1st POV, absolutely fantastic. I can honestly say that there are few fics written in this particular style (present tense first ftw) that I actually like and think are half as good as the one you just posted. I would love to see more from you. <3 Thanks for having the balls to explore Bee's head further than any of us dared before!

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 10:04:31 UTC 4 years ago

Eeeee, thank you so much! I was a little uncertain with the POV, since it's rather difficult to pull off from all that I've seen. It's wonderful that it seems to have worked! :D

[info]minishini

4 years ago

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[info]onefishjyuufish

4 years ago

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[info]the_oxymormon

July 12 2007, 09:27:31 UTC 4 years ago

Wow, I loved the POV. That was awesome.
Cute in a different way? It's almost as of I wasn't reading smut at all.

Great great job. <:

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 10:08:16 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you!

[info]fantasyprone

July 12 2007, 12:19:39 UTC 4 years ago

Whoa *o* that was fantastic! I love how Bee gets into it =3

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 23:56:47 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you! And, dude, how could he not when they're going at it inside him? *g*

[info]greenet

July 12 2007, 13:03:51 UTC 4 years ago

...I think I love you.

Awesome!

*hearts!*

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 23:57:43 UTC 4 years ago

Awwww! *draws hearts and stars around you* Thank you!

[info]teekachu

July 12 2007, 14:27:10 UTC 4 years ago

.................
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I don't have words for how awesome this is... I seriously don't have the vocabulary. All I can do is squee and know that I'll be using this later. :P

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 12 2007, 23:59:03 UTC 4 years ago

*snorfles* Enjoy, hon! Thank you for the kind words! :D

[info]im_unloved

July 12 2007, 15:24:41 UTC 4 years ago

i could never do that.first person POV and make it that fluid.fantastic stuff.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 13 2007, 00:00:21 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you very much! And, hey, I didn't think I could do it either, until I apparently did.

[info]aldofeidt

3 years ago

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[info]marcyleecorgan

July 12 2007, 21:32:22 UTC 4 years ago

Ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh. Pretty. So, so, imagery-filled and HOT.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 13 2007, 00:03:14 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks so much!

[info]mardigrasmaven

July 12 2007, 23:47:39 UTC 4 years ago

Whoa... that was amazing. And from Bee's perspective as he felt all of it going on. It was just amazingly written and I applaud you. Great fic!

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 13 2007, 00:07:23 UTC 4 years ago

Oooh, thank you so much! I had a lot of fun with the perspective, yes. :)

[info]speechie42

July 13 2007, 00:02:54 UTC 4 years ago

I really like the first person view of this, it's very...insightful. Me likes.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 13 2007, 00:10:05 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you!

[info]wingwyrm

July 16 2007, 16:52:43 UTC 4 years ago

Wait, you mean I didn't comment the first time I read this? Wow... 'Cause it's really great!

Good job!

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 20:16:11 UTC 4 years ago

Wow, I'm honored! :D Thank you!

[info]saya_aensland

July 16 2007, 17:03:53 UTC 4 years ago

I already memoried this the first time around, but I figured I should throw a review your way as well.

Mmmmm. ♥ ♥ ♥ I love how Bumblebee seems to gain pleasure just from the voyuerism of it, and how Sam and Mikaela trust Bee enough to share that highly private act with him. Bah, not good with words. Just know that I went ♥.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 21:46:08 UTC 4 years ago

WOO. Thank you so much! That's awesome it's memory-worthy. :D

And hee, I think that sounds just fine, and I very much appreciate it!

[info]ilyena_sylph

July 16 2007, 17:06:24 UTC 4 years ago

I... want to be in my bunk! *WHINE*

It is NOT FAIR to find smut this hot and wonderful whilst on break at work!

*WHINE*

You did an Awesome job. Just... wow.

I'm blown away, and completely having reactions I should not be while at work.

*shudders, gasps, pimps to everyone she can think of*

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 21:49:48 UTC 4 years ago

Haha! Thank you for feeling it's pimp-worthy and I'm sorry you have to tough it out - I can sympathize, really. ;)

[info]mishey22

July 16 2007, 17:30:54 UTC 4 years ago

Damn, that was HOT and you did a great job with the PoV beng Bee's!

Hehe, Bee takes care of Sam in all aspects of his life..

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 21:53:44 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you! And yes, yes he does. Sam kind of needs it, I think. ;)

[info]blackrosebard

July 16 2007, 17:33:03 UTC 4 years ago

I am floored....damn hot, damn loving perspective.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 21:54:29 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked out as well as it did. :)

[info]fegli

July 16 2007, 17:42:32 UTC 4 years ago

Awww little Bumblebee. I wonder if he really would accept Sam having sex in his back seat... provided they were all, you know, real. He's such a cute little robot car. <3

Great job, man! I like how you managed to compare Bumblebee's "driving" to their passion. You'd kinda really have to hope he wouldn't get pulled over, though.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 22:03:06 UTC 4 years ago

I'd like to think so? Or who knows, since an alien race of robots probably has vastly different opinions/concepts on a lot of things, sex included. I'll just continue to believe that it would be a big huge YES. ;)

But thank you! I'm glad that detail came through. And yeah, it sort of depends on Bee finding some really backroad-backroads. *g*

[info]fegli

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[info]seiberwing

July 16 2007, 18:45:27 UTC 4 years ago

So much for win and awesome. I like that it's different from the typical 'sex wtf whut' that you usually see in robot/human fics. Bumblebee definitely knows what's going on and he's quite emotionally involved in it.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 22:18:36 UTC 4 years ago

Bumblebee's a smart bot! And I can't believe that any advanced, sentient species would not have found some way to share pleasure in an intimate (or exhibitionary?) fashion. And thanks for reading and for the comment!

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[info]themadpuppy

July 16 2007, 19:10:06 UTC 4 years ago

I like the ideas you pulled out! ♥I just adore the idea of having sex in a car who's speeding. Lucky them.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 16 2007, 22:20:49 UTC 4 years ago

Mmmmmm, yes. I have to admit that was one of the first ideas that popped up when brainstorming.

Thank you!

[info]darkdanc3r

July 16 2007, 22:48:46 UTC 4 years ago

eh... buh... ung... *pant* I created an icon just for this fic (well... and I've been needing a Bee icon anyway.)

This was damned hot. I'm not sure who I envy more - Sam for having sex in a car like that, or Bee, for getting to just... yeah. Watch... damn.

*loves on Bumblebee*

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 18 2007, 02:12:57 UTC 4 years ago

Wow, way to make a girl feel special! :D Thank you so much!

[info]speechie42

July 16 2007, 23:42:38 UTC 4 years ago

I already read this eslewhere but I'll comment you again to say:

dsjvmcgfiuhhhhhhhhhh...0.o

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 18 2007, 02:39:01 UTC 4 years ago

Heeeeee! Thank you again! ^____^

[info]snowwolf75

July 17 2007, 04:07:23 UTC 4 years ago

Hot damn, I'm glad I followed this link. Must find more trans porn. :}

[info]metal_equine

July 17 2007, 13:55:46 UTC 4 years ago

Yes, you do. ^_^ And to the OP... WOW!, love it, and...and...not finding words for how good this is! *adores*

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[info]fanfictionaxis

July 17 2007, 15:30:07 UTC 4 years ago

Oh wow!
That was good and I haven't even seen the movie yet!
And yet, I love this fic.
Great work.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 18 2007, 02:44:02 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you!

[info]raisedbymoogles

July 18 2007, 00:06:10 UTC 4 years ago

.....*THUD*

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 18 2007, 02:46:49 UTC 4 years ago

Hee, sorry? XD

[info]ladyrazorsharp

July 18 2007, 06:26:43 UTC 4 years ago

Omghshhh. *blinkblink* Wow. Just...wow.

Loved the part about the blue sparks. And how 'Bee switched the songs appropriately. Hot stuff.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 18 2007, 23:53:07 UTC 4 years ago

Some of my favorite bits, right there. :) Thank you!

[info]luckystar37

July 18 2007, 08:04:23 UTC 4 years ago

That was amazing... I loved all the little details of contact and how much they meant. I also liked the lack of jealousy -- which is sometimes fallen on to illustrate the affection Bee has. You found new and creative ways and it made for a great read.

[info]onefishjyuufish

July 23 2007, 04:47:05 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you very much! That's interesting to know - I honestly haven't read much fic for them yet, but I'm glad that I managed something different. :)
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